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托福机经2013.08.17写作
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WRITING SECTION

Integrated writing task

Topic discussed: 说的是动物为什么要play

Note

 

Reading:

1,消耗多余能量;2,是一种体育锻炼,提高技能;3,社交行为。

 

Lecture: Marsupial

听力反对阅读的三个解释理由分别是:1,没有多余能量的动物也玩儿;2,是否玩儿对技能熟练度没影响;3,动物观察表明不需要。

 

Glossary

consume energy 消耗能量

exercise 锻炼

 

 

Independent writing task

Essay question

 It is more important for schools to fund their students’ social activities than to improve students’ meals.

【话题提示】

题目解析:这次的考题是我们在机经,以及往次考试中最为常见的比较类题目。题目中对两个事物的重要性做了大小的比较。然而我们不难发现,两个事物:学生的社区/社团活动”“学生伙食两者间并不具备可比性。所以我们可以直接拒绝比较大小,在主体段部分分别一一段论述二者各自的重要性即可。结尾段部分,以A=B的观点总结,对题目观点进行否定。

 

Words and expressions

various skills and abilities 各种技能

negligible 可以忽略的

sufficient nutrition 足够的营养

Sample answer

Recently, the issue about whether students’ social activities are more important than their meals has aroused considerable controversies. Some hold that schools should fund more on the former than on the latter. However, I personally disagree with this point of view.

  Admittedly, students’ social activities are of great significance. social activities offer students the opportunities to practice various skills and abilities. Also, they provide the chance and platform for students to meet new friends. the importance of friendship is widely recognized in today’s world since our mental health and career development relies on it to a great extent. with the current overwhelming pressure students receive from school and their families, it is not hard to imagine how much they will suffer without friendship. if they establish a large network of friends, they find someone to confide in and to release their inner stress, and hence guarantee that they grow up healthily.

However, meal’s importance is also not negligible. As the saying goes, we are what we eat. No one would deny that meals are the main source of nutrition we intake, which ensure the perfect function of our body and our brain. All students need a healthy body to study efficiently. Meals with sufficient nutrition offer plenty of vitamins and other nutrients that can make it easier for them to concentrate. Hypothetically, schools fail to provide meals sufficient in nutrition would lead to the students’ malnutrition, which would bring negative influence to students’ academic performance.

 

  In conclusion, although I concede that it is of crucial importance for schools to fund their students’’ activities since they can learn many things from actual society but from book, I do not think to fund activities is more important than to invest in students’’ meals since food really plays a vital role on students’ study.

 

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