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托福机经2013.09.14写作
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WRITING SECTION

Integrated writing task

Topic discussed: petroglyph

Notes

Reading: the origin of petroglyph

Lecture:

l  样本很少,且土著100年前就不在了

l  捕鸟一般用小石头结构或者去窝里用手捉

l  如果用来天文观测,应该在同一个方向。

Glossary

astronomical observation  天文观测

petroglyph 岩石雕刻

 

Independent writing task

Essay question

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

People who keep their room neat and organized are more likely to be successful in the future.

Words and expressions

chaotic  混乱的

observe the discipline  遵守纪律

Sample answer

Perhaps no issue in the world is as significant success. For me, success is not to have a great career or high score, but to enjoy the daily life. Despite various responses people may have on this topic, I, given the chance, prefer to endorse that students who keep their rooms neat and organized will actually be more successful

 

In the first place, students who keep their rooms neat and organized can deal well with their daily life, can offer a better condition for other activities. For example, the top student in my class cannot only enjoy her studying but also make her dormitory a warm home. A student’s study and daily events consist of their campus life. If a student’s life is totally a mess, he might have little mind on their study.

 

Further evidence in support of my opinion lies in the fact that these students care more about disciplines and have good performance in order. According to a report, approximately 80 percent of students who keep their rooms neat and organized enjoy more praises from the teachers and their employees. Those students have formed good habits in their daily events, which is the essential qualities for their success. Therefore, they can perform in an organized way and adapt to the new rules quickly.

Admittedly, there are some successful students whose rooms are not neat or organized.  They might be successful in their career or study, but they don't succeed on their daily life. And they could be even more successful if they have learned how to lead a smooth life, which starts with a neat and organized room. Therefore, success belongs to students who develop the qualities of observing the disciplines and behaving in order by way of keeping their rooms neat and organized.

 

 

 

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