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托福机经2014.05.25写作
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WRITING SECTION

Integrated writing task

Topic discussed:southwest American 的一群人的消失

Notes

Reading: 

是干旱引起的

l 1.documented global warming 全球变暖

l 2. Irrigation system有许多大坝类的储水工程

l 3. 文化发展了人口增长了,干旱使得食物短缺所以这些人移居别处了 

 

Lecture: Marsupial

反对阅读内容

l 1.global warming虽然可能确实减少了降水量,但是证据显示当时的降雨量足够人们种庄稼

l 2. 这些大坝是在他们消失一百年前为了抵抗一个长达50年的干旱就建立的,同时也证明了他们的capacity of surviving through drought

l 3.人们的消失可能还有别的因为eg:war。且有证据表明可能与其他人产生了conflicts而被其他文明driven away

 

Glossary

Global warming 全球变暖

Drought 干旱

Irrigation 灌溉

Capacity能力

 

Independent writing task

Essay question

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Parents must have strict rules to help their children to be successful.

话题提示

      如果支持这个观点,可侧重讲“rules来说,没有规矩不成方圆,青少年和孩子们需要教导和引导才能走上正确的成功之路

如果反对这个观点,可侧重“strict来论证,过于严苛的管教会束缚小孩的创造力或者产生逆反心理等。

Sample answer

As believed by many people, many Chinese parents hold that strict parenting is a decisive factor in helping their children succeed. However, I believe that children nowadays are burdened with too many rules and that strict rules don’t necessarily ensure a quick path to success.

Firstly, family rules and expectation imposed on children are often somewhat too pressing. Chinese education normally requires students to follow a standardized path to college graduation, suggesting drop-outs or occasional absence from classes are not to be tolerated. Parents, therefore, often demand students to follow the social conventions and not to violate any rules. Any deviation from the expectation is deemed to fail without question. However, the truth is that many successful people like Bill Gates and Steve Jobs rose to fame and success without completing their college curriculum. Strict rules may help children be better disciplined and guided, but is not an indispensable key to open the door of success.

Secondly, strict rules may play a negative role if not properly practiced. Children, especially those in their adolescent years, often needs more freedom and given more space and their own choices. Guidance and advices from parents should be given, but mandatory and strict rules can easily invite resistance. Many family conflicts results from ineffective communication and strict parenting, even if the purpose of which are often well-intended and to help children to be successful. The negative effect may also include impaired creativity that children suffer from. Long have kids been told about what should they do and what they must not do, children raised with so many rules around them often turn out to be unimaginative and be deprived of innovative thinking. Therefore, strict rules on children may very likely to have the adverse influence on their future career and personal development.

I would like to say that in order to achieve success, rules are necessary to help children build a good sense of moral value and self-discipline, but strict rules may have the quite opposite effect.

 

 

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