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托福机经2014.11.23写作
发布时间:2015-01-09 作者: 来源于:昂立外语网站

WRITING SECTION

Integrated writing task

Topic discussed: 罗马帝国衰败和成功的原因

Notes

Reading: 

1,  有能力组建军队,被征服国家里收取俘虏

2, 罗马帝国的军权独一无二至高无上

3, 罗马国家机经好,收税支持军队花销

Lecture: 反驳

1,军队不全是罗马人,俘虏不忠在大战时背叛罗马

2,初期是如此,但后期国王不做political decision时会有人挑战王权,且国王有私心

3,农业等增长已停止,而军事消耗还在增加,人民反抗情绪大导致不忠

Glossary

Slave 奴隶

Loyalty 忠诚

 

 

 

Independent writing task

Essay question

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Your job has a greater effect on your overall happiness than the social life does.

【话题提示】

1、表明立场

2、分论点:工作提供物质保障

3分论点:内在的快乐原动力

4、结尾总结

 

Sample answer

The pursuit of happiness is one of the basic instincts of human beings. Among all the factors, work and social life are often considered influential to one’s sense of happiness. Despite all the heated debates, I believe it is ones’ job rather than social life that has a greater impact on one’ s overall happiness.

First, a decent and well-paid job guarantees living standard and offers substantial leisure life. Admittedly, wealth doesn’t necessarily bring happiness. A well-paid job do can open up door to a bigger and diverse world. Salary gained from a job can not only meet one’s eating and housing demand, but also cater to the needs of one’s spiritual world. This is because abundant financial gain enables people to travel around the world- conversing with foreigners, jungle flight in Chiang Mai, balloon sightseeing in Turkey or parachuting in New Zealand- all these exciting adventurous journeys and experiences can bring surprises and happiness to a person.
 

Additionally, achievement stemming from a well-accomplished task can bring people happiness as well. Rising through the social hierarchy or striving to achieve excellence at work is widely considered a process of self-realization. After long-term hard work and diligence, an initially frustrating challenge can ultimately be a stepping-stone to one’ success. The overcame challenge can either be learning how to get along with a picky boss or solving a technical problem in the computer system at work. All these experiences offer people a sensation of delight and satisfaction and can even motivate employees to aim for greater improvement at their job. Compared with the happiness brought by making new friends or a pleasant conversation, this kind of happiness can be far more lasting and rewarding.

In final analysis, for all the pleasure and laughter social life can bring people, one’s work is a greater source of one’s internal happiness.

 

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