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托福机经2014.11.29写作
发布时间:2015-01-13 作者: 来源于:昂立外语网站

WRITING SECTION

Integrated writing task

Topic discussed: narwhal tusk的用途

Notes

Reading: 

1,narwhal生存在arctic ocean,有很多ice sheets,它们需要tusks来刺破冰层,pierce ice sheets for breathing fresh air

2,tusk是雄性narwhal用来打架和赢得配偶的;

3,tusk可以用来侦测海洋环境,密度和盐度,从而保证更好的存活millions of microscopic pores as sensors to detect environment

Lecture: 反驳

1ice sheets本身有30cm厚,不可能刺破冰层(impossible to penetrate)有可能的是那些冰层已经破了;

2,远距离的观察让人们有力一种错误的理解,近距离的观察表明,这是一种gentle communication 

3,所有的male都有tusk,但是很少的femaletusk, 但是femake却活的更长寿,因此阅读的理论无法解释这种现象

Glossary

Tusk 长牙

Pierce 刺穿

Penetrate渗透刺入

 

 

 

Independent writing task

Essay question

Some people like to keep records or experiences by exposing photos on social networking sites. Others do not like to create such records. Which way do you prefer?

【话题提示】

1、表明立场

2、分论点:泄露信息

3、分论点2:自我为中心,现实交流无能

4、分论点3:忽略身边的美好事物

 

Sample answer

Every time I open the social-networking app on my phone, a lot of pictures and notification pop into my eyes. Recently, a standard procedure of making new friends begins with the exchange of Wechat account. Indeed, social-networking websites have gone viral on the Internet and are triggering a nationwide debate. People can upload their pictures and converse with friends online within just a few seconds. However, I don’t think it’s necessary to upload pictures or information on the social-networking website at the expense of privacy leak and information safety.

First of all, sharing your photos and information on the website will leak your privacy and pose potential risk to the users. Initially acting on the purpose of sharing moments of happiness and joy with your friendly, uploading pictures is likely to have detriment. This is especially true when some strangers can have access to your uploaded personal files and even everyday pictures. This information may be used against you and for criminal purpose. My friend Lucy is a case in point. She is a huge fan of Wechat, a popular social networking website in China. She has posted tons of photos on this app. One day, however, she found by accident that her photos had been in a shopping website. Reposting her pictures without permission is a violation of her privacy and profit.

Apart from the security problems, uploading information with photos hinders effective communication in the real world. Despite the vast number of friends a user has online, they seldom communicate with these friends online or offline at all. These “friends” are just like “zombie friends”. Therefore, for these users, uploading photos and information is only a way of showing off. Boys or girls send selfie photos online and become increasingly self-centered. As a result, immersion in the self-appreciation and lack of efficient communication make them shy and reserved during face-to-face or real life communication.

Also, addiction to sharing the photos on the social websites deprives us of the time and ability to discover the beauty around us. My parents used to take me to have a trip. I remember from my childhood that during these trips, we can always encounter surprises and appreciate the amazing beauty of nature. However, things have changed since my parents started using Wechat. They become so obsessed with sharing their journey moments on this app that they almost have no time to enjoy the journey itself and communicate with me. Therefore, by keeping us occupied, social net-working websites make us unable to spot and value beauty around us.

 

 

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