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托福机经2014.12.13写作
发布时间:2015-01-23 作者: 来源于:昂立外语网站

WRITING SECTION

Integrated writing task

Topic discussed: 解决lionfish破坏珊瑚礁的三种方法

Notes

reading:

l 通过人工捕捉来保护coral reef生态系统

l lionfish引入鱼市场,这样可以减少对本地鱼对需求,让他们能有时间恢复。

l 人们可以把它们用于日常饮食,因为它们高蛋白低脂肪。

 

Listening:

1. 人工捕捉无法区分lionfish和其他的鱼,很多稀有的鱼也都在coral reef, 会减少其他鱼种。

2. 引进市场会导致有人人工养殖。Lionfish会从fish farm逃离,这就造成更严重的入侵问题。

3. 有些lionfish有毒,适用会造成呕吐,麻痹,疼痛的现象。食用鱼没法每条都检验,所以吃了不安全。

 

Glossary

Background knowledge:

狮子鱼 

蓑鲉,别名狮子鱼、火鱼等典型特征就是大大的扇子一样的胸鳍。主要以甲壳动物为食。多产于温带靠海岸的岩礁或珊瑚礁内,分布于印度-西太平洋暖水海域,为小型海洋鱼类。栖息于岩礁或珊瑚丛中,有的见于深水 。非常危险的鱼类,不仅对小鱼非常危险,对于人类而言也有威胁,其背鳍上的刺毒性很强。遇敌时,即侧身以背鳍鳍棘向对方冲刺。鳍棘具毒腺,人被刺后剧痛,严重者呼吸困难,甚至晕厥。

 

 

 

 

Independent writing task

Essay question

Do you agree or disagree with the statement students now are more interested in politics than in the past?

 

【话题提示】

Thesis statement: agree

 

Supporting statements:

l internet offers students more access to politics 

l school atmosphere requirestudents to concern about politics

 

Sample answer

 

What do you think is the coolest topic among adolescents? Internet games? Comics? Sports idols? Yes, those are their most common conversations for casual time, but in serious situations, such as in a speech, a debate or a school election, all those recreational topics can’t be up to par. They prefer to talk about things with public concerns to demonstrate their originality and ingenuity, so political events are second choices to none. Proceeding from this, students nowadays have more interest in politics than before.

 

First, it’s easier for students to concern about politics in this era than in the past. We have to admit that Internet has brought a thorough revolution in people’s life, which offers more access to global information. Events, no matter where they happen, can spread to every corner of the world as quick as possible. American presidential election can be a good example. Technically, it’s just a run concerned by Americans and has an effect on the U.S. But nowadays, people all over the world can get the updated information. Young people, especially students in school, are the group with more interest in it. They think the U.S president’s perspective can influence the world situation, balance relations among countries. In a narrow sense, it will influence their opportunities of overseas study. And at least, students who want to improve English can learn a lot from the election speech.

 

School atmosphere is also groundwork for students to get interested in politics. For an academic reason, if a student wants to be a curve wrecker, he is required to have comprehensive acknowledgement in addition to all-around subject knowledge, so he should pay attention to current events, which definitely include political incidents. For a personal reason, teenagers all want to be influential in a circle. Apart from handsome appearance, athletic body and outstanding scores, unique style of conversation can attract most too. Can you make a picture? A good-looking boy stands on the stage but makes a shallow and boring speech, or a boy with plain appearance talks about world peace with an example that Pope John Paul II declined a private visit of Dalailama. Which one is more attractive? So when students focus on politics, it offers them interesting topics. And in a long term, their logical and analytic abilities are improved, which helps them become more charming, it is a virtuous circle. No wonder students are more interested in politics.

 

The world we are living in is totally different from the world in the past, young people see differently, concern differently and talk differently. Students pay more attention to politics, since they think politics is no longer a thing out of reach and they realize that political events do influence personal life.

 

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