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托福机经2015.01.25写作
发布时间:2015-03-20 作者: 来源于:昂立外语网站

下是昂立托福培训为各位考生整理的2015年1月25日托福写作机经

WRITING SECTION

Integrated writing task

Topic discussed: 公司实行奖励机制incentive program

Notes

Reading: 

l 帮助员工戒烟减肥

l 给员工带来更多假期

l 健康生活的员工更有效率,公司可以盈利更多

Lecture: 反驳

l 好处不长远,大多数人戒烟后又会重新开始,减肥会反弹

l 这种机制不公平,一些人天生肥胖超重,不能强迫每个人都减肥;生活方式不健康不应与假期挂钩,他们同样需要照顾家庭

l 美国平均跳槽几率很大,健康劳动力对公司的影响短暂

Glossary

incentive刺激

derive衍生

temporary临时的

 

Independent writing task

Essay question

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: classmates and partners who communicate with each other face to face can finish a project better than by sending e-mail

 

Sample answer

With the advancement of technology, innumerable forms of communication have been introduced into our daily life. Cell phones, text messaging and emails make it easy for us to reach anybody, anywhere. However, despite all of the advantages, there still exists many disadvantages in using these high-tech products. From my perspective, the best way of communication is still having a conversation with others face to face.

First of all, text messaging is an emotionless form of communication which eliminates all the expressions or body languages of the speakers in a conversation. When we talk with someone, verbal language is only a very small part of the dialogue, we express our feelings, ideas and opinions through many other aspects. Even a subtle change of tone can lead to different meanings. For example, a rising tone may imply one’s doubt while a falling tone shows one’s approval. E-mails can hardly deliver information like that.

Secondly, it is hard to discuss difficult topics over e-mails. They can be troublesome if you are planning to discuss a complex issue with others although in some cases they are still useful. A quick and nasty e-mail can often be seen when the discussion becomes heated. A lot of problems are popping out and one turns out to be impatient to organize the language, making others hard to understand the content and leading the conversation into a mess.

Last but not the least, e-mail delivery can sometimes be postponed due to many causes, such as the breakdown of computers or network, and even simple power outage can lead to the failure of sending or receiving e-mails. Imagine you are right in the middle of a discussion with your classmates and you just sent your idea to them. Now you are looking forward to receiving their reply, but all of a sudden, your computer cannot function well. Undoubtedly, it must be very disappointing and annoying. However, you never need to worry problems like that in a face-to-face conversation.

To sum up, although technology development has provided us with  convenience and it also has benefits in a conversation, I still think traditional way of communication is the better option when discussing with others in doing a project

 

 

以上是昂立外语带来的2015年1月25日托福写作机经,在这里大家考出佳绩!对于托福写作机经的备考,大家可以针对一些托福写作题目进行练习,总结一些常考的托福写作模板。如需了解更多托福机经的相关信息,欢迎拨打昂立英语的免费咨询热线400-820-8062进行咨询,或者点击托福培训官方网站页面的“在线咨询”与昂立托福名师直接对话 

 

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