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托福机经2015.01.31写作
发布时间:2015-03-25 作者: 来源于:昂立外语网站

下是昂立托福培训为各位考生整理的2015年1月31日托福写作机经

WRITING SECTION

Integrated writing task

Topic discussedasteroid colony是否适合居住

Notes

Reading: 

l Low gravity 使得着陆更安全,起飞消耗更少的燃料

l Valuable metal人们可以在asteroids上找到很多地球稀缺的金属,这样支持者可以获得更多的利润

l 很容易到达,有一些asteroids离地球很近,因此往返都很容易

Lecture: 反驳

l 会有很多的风险,比如健康问题。低密度回事肌肉功能丧失,骨密度下降

l 会有很多的额外成本,比如运输这些金属会有一些隐藏的成本。无法保证asteroids上的金属和我们猜想的一样。若供应量不大,人们无法获利。

l 不好回来,不寻常的轨道,往返比到火星的距离更远。

 

Glossary

Asteroid  小行星

 

Independent writing task

Essay question

The rules that the society requires young people to follow and obey are too strict.

 

Sample answer

Young people are bound by a wide array of social and legal conventions, and it seems to me that these rules are excessive and inappropriate. Too many strict rules have hindered the growth of young people.

If anyone needs convincing evidence that the society has created too many rules for young people, here is the proof. Social conventions are the first things that impeded the development of the young. Certain standardized paths are set for the young people in my country and these linear paths define the success of young people. Take schooling, one of the mechanisms for young people to gain success, as an example. It follows a route like this: 12-year-time education to prepare you for college which prepares you for work and an approach to a decent job with a brief period of independence before settling down as an adult. Deviating from this is generally called “go astray” and causes tensions in family. Therefore, it sounds horrible for young people to drop out of schools or colleges. However, this is exactly what Steve Jobs did. He became successful without following the most accepted route to success. The problem is that, the rules known as social conventions, which were initially intended to help young people, end up being obstacles.

Legal conventions are the next. The laws governing the behavior of young people aren’t taking practical considerations into account. For example, in China, males must be at least 22 in order to get married and females must be at least 20 to do so. Some argue that it is unwise for males and females under these ages to get married. While in my opinion, the law makers haven’t got a comprehensive view of today’s young people. Nowadays, the young people are much more sophisticated than we were in the past and have the right to get married at an earlier age. Such legal provisions are infringement of rights of young people and need to be amended. Inappropriate restriction on legal age for marriage is testimony to too many existing rules for young people in society.

Admittedly, according to the physical and emotional realities of young people, they do need guidelines when they grow up. With the right and suitable type of guidance, it can be very helpful for youth to live a happy life. But the right type of guidance does not have a universally accepted content. The problem which we are facing today is that the society has created too many rules for young people. Young people should learn and adapt by themselves, or to find their own way to mature and success.

I reckon that society has created too many rules for young people. We should give them a little more freedom and let they find their own way. Only in this way can they settle down as adults.

 

 

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