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托福机经2015.09.05写作
发布时间:2015-10-16 作者: 来源于:昂立外语网站

以下是昂立托福培训为各位考生整理的2015年9月5日托福写作机经

WRITING SECTION

 

Integrated writing task

Topic: 

小动物小时候玩耍原因

Sample answer

 Reading:

提出三个theories

1. Surplus energy theory: 小动物不能很好地manage energy; 有多余的能量一定要用完

2. 小动物play是为了hunt for food

3. 小动物play是为了establish relationship in groups

Listening

反驳阅读的三个方案

1. Baby seals 不能自己找食物食物来源是妈妈喂养,没有surplus energy, 但是seals still play.  

2. 两组小猫一组可以play一组不play. 长大后可以play的那组并没有成为better hunters.

3. Rats小时候play, 长了一定时间才开始establish relationship. 在建立关系前就play. Playrelationship不一定有关系

 

Independent writing task

Essay question

In order to attract more tourists, government should improve the safety by hiring more police or improve the appearance by improving the old buildings and streets.

【话题提示】

Improve the safety

 

Supporting idea:

1.城市再美,不安全游客还是有顾虑 

2.老房子和街道传承了当地的历史文化

3. 旅游不仅是看风景还有购物游玩都需要安全保障

Sample answer

Supporting idea:
     When talking about traveling, I believe the importance of safety should be paid more attention to than the appearance of tourist attractions.
     We all know that Paris used to be one of the top tourist destinations. But nowadays, it is not as attractive as before. One of the reasons is the safety issue. The news of people being robbed under the Eiffel Tower in the daylight have often been heard. The crime rate in Paris has been climbing higher as the tourist business plunging. It can be seen that people will take into account whether it’s safe or not when they plan traveling. The Paris government should have known by now how important it is to have a safe environment for tourists.
     Some people will argue that the appearance of a place has more appeal than the safety. I have a different opinion. The history of a city is reflected in the old buildings and streets. The antique atmosphere is the very essence of the local culture. Therefore, if the appearance of the streets and buildings are improved, they no longer can attract the tourists because they lose all the cultural and historical touch.
     Last but not least, travelers nowadays not satisfied with merely sightseeing. There are a variety of activities that they want to do, such as shopping at local markets and experiencing everyday life in a new place. If they know this place is not safe, they will need to worry about their wallets being stolen or themselves being in danger all the time. In this way, the traveler will not be able to enjoy the stay or even the scenery

 

以上是昂立外语带来的2015年9月5日托福写作机经,在这里大家考出佳绩!对于托福写作机经的备考,大家可以针对一些托福写作题目进行练习,总结一些常考的托福写作模板。如需了解更多托福机经的相关信息,欢迎拨打昂立英语的免费咨询热线400-820-8062进行咨询,或者点击托福培训官方网站页面的“在线咨询”与昂立托福名师直接对话 

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