Lesson 44 Speed and Comfort
Which form. of transport do you prefer?
By Yin Zeng
Each form. of transport has its own advantages, but nothing can match cars for freedom and convenient. (convenience才是名词哦)
Driving has many advantages. You can go everywhere you like in your car. Cars don't runs slower than a common train. You can drive at a high speed along the motorway. If you have a big car, it would not be boring along the way. You can play cards in it. After being tired (现在分词用得恰当), you have already seen the destination. （see the destination的表达有些奇怪，不如arrive at/get to好） You can also carry an iPad when you are on the journey. When you arrive, you needn't worry about the time. You can stay there as long as you like. You needn't look for the buses to the scenic spots. You also needn't be anxious about the food is not your taste (about后面加宾语，可用定语从句来修饰food). You can decide everything yourself.
I think driving is the best way of travelling.
文章结构比较完整。中间一段阐述了开车相比其他交通方式的便捷之处和优势。要注意审题，既然写的是你更喜欢的交通方式，还是应该写my opinion~ 避免一些语法错误，句式还可以再丰富些。总体不错！
By Pan Wenlei
You may feel surprised at the form. of transport I prefer for long-distance journeys because of the selection -- ship.（because of the selection可以省略，直接引出ship） You may think it will cost you too much time to arrive at your destination, but the advantage is superior to the disadvantage of it.
Trips by sea or cruises offer a great variety of civilized comforts. You can stretch your legs on the spacious decks, play games, swim, meet interesting people and enjoy good food--always assuming.(assuming what?? 这是书上的句子，可以尝试paraphrase吗？) You can choose a sunny day, lying on （现在分词表示伴随状语）a chair on deck to enjoy sunbathing. With the sea wind blowing over the deck, your hair dancing （这里dance应该用做动词而不是非谓语哦）in the air. You will be deeply attracted by the sparkled sea in the sunlight.
Although you will not be satisfied with the speed of the trips by sea, you will be attracted by the breathingtaking charm of it. Written description cannot completely describe its enjoyment. It is really worth trying.
Trip by sea的特点描述得比较详尽。全篇的人称都是you，最好能根据要求以第一人称来写，课文中的句子如果能用自己的话来说就更好了~！
By Yu Xue
When it comes to my favorite transport for long distance journeys, I prefer ship best (prefer和best不能同时出现哦). As we all know, the most serious thing of a ship journey is seasickness. Luckily, I don’t have a seasickness, so I can perfectly enjoy a ship journey. (此句可以稍作修改，Fortunately, I can enjoy a ship journey without the trouble of seasickness.更精练些~) I think a ship journey is a little like an air one. They are both comfortable, have many different kinds of services and delicious food. （这两句可合并：Similar to air journey, a ship journey features comfort, various services and delicious food.） Sometimes a ship even has some entertainment facilities for passengers. And a ship is much safer than a plane. Although it may take a long time, I can enjoy the amazing view during the journey which is also a relaxation of travelling.(定语从句) A ship ticket isn’t too expensive, so it can save a lot of money for the travelling. In a conclusion, I really enjoy a ship journey, and I think I can feel great fun from it.
文章内容很完整，将ship journey 的优势逐一列出，还包括了与travel by air的对比。使内容更充实。句式可以尝试多变化些，尤其是简单句与长句的使用。文中的衔接词用得不错，还可再多些逻辑性的连接词~！
期待其他同学的作品哦~n_n
