一般的漫画作文都是以揭露问题为主,这类题材的文章可采用3段式---第一段描述漫画,提出漫画中揭示的问题;第二段分析问题的成因或问题可能导致的不良后果;第三段谈个人看法或建议。 此类作文常用句式有:(开头段)From the picture we can see that __(描述漫画中的情景)__. What is illustrated in the picture is __(提出漫画所揭示的问题)___. (中间段) There may be _(2 or 3)__ reasons responsible for / accounting for/ contributing to this phenomenon. (结尾段) As far as I am concerned, effective measures should be taken to _______. 2、注意事项 1. 书写清晰,卷面整洁; 2. 重视首段和首句; 3. 重点检查每个句子中动词使用是否正确,因 为动词错被认为是严重错误; 4. 分段书写.目前很多文章通常有三个部分组 成---提出问题,分析问题,个人观点; 5. 记背结构词句、典型文体的模板。 “启”---创造良好开端。常用表达 “启”的过渡词语和词组有: in the first place, firstly, to start with, to begin with等。 常用表达 “启”的句型有: as is known to all/ as we all know; as the proverb says; 等。 “承”---顺势承上启下。常用表达“承”的过渡词语和词组有:secondly; in addition; besides; furthermore; moreover; what is more; what is worse, in other words等。常用表达 “承”的句型有:compared with that…; It can be easily proved that…; It is no wonder that…; what is more serious is that…等。 “转”---巧妙转折过渡。常用表达“转”的过渡词语和词组有:but, however, on the other hand, on the contrary, in spite of, regardless of等。常用表达 “转”的句型有: Every coin has two sides.等 “合”---完美结束全文。 常用表达“合”的过渡词语和词组有:in a word, in conclusion, in summary, as a result, above all, on the whole等。常用表达 “合”的句型有: something must be done to….; it can be safely concluded from… that…; it may be briefly summed up as follows等。 ? People have paid more attention to economic growth than the environmental protection. / People have given priority to economic growth over the environmental protection. ?It is well known that…/It is commonly believed that / It is universally acknowledged that…
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