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Guided Writing Directions: White an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 以下是2014年中国某城市交通事故发生原因的调查信息统计表,请根据此表,写一篇120—150字的文章。你的文章需包括: 1. 简要描述下表 2. 谈谈你的看法和建议
样文: 1.As what can be seen from the above table, 2.the year of 2014 has witnessed a large number of traffic accidents in a certain Chinese city, 3. which are due to five main causes. Among them, drivers’ careless turning left is the leading one 4.followed by drivers’ driving under the influence of alcohol because of its largest percentage increase. 5.What hide behind these five causes are drivers’ neglect of traffic rules and the lack of reverence for life, the pedestrians’ life. And, of course, pedestrians should also be responsible for their own life. Therefore, relevant authorities should impose stiff new penalties, 6.including paying large amounts of fines and criminal charges, on drivers caught because of drunk driving or other illegal behaviors. And also, the public traffic safety education should be widely spread, 7.reinforcing both drivers’ and pedestrians’ safety awareness. No matter what measures are taken, the real intention is not to punish but to remind people of the preciousness of life. You should know that for your families, you are the indispensable one. Cherish life, love life. Ø 内容分析: 这是一篇图表作文。首先要对图表给出的信息进行归纳概括,表中信息不必一一指出,只需提及主要信息即可。随后要对已知信息进行分析,并针对根本原因给出相应的解决方案。文章话题是交通事故,对我们来说并不陌生,难度适中。 Ø 精彩亮点分析: 亮点一:利用介词短语as +宾语从句结构引出表格内容。 亮点二:the year of… has witnessed…是表达在某年发生某事的另一种表达方式 亮点三:which引导非限定性定语从句,起补充说明作用。 亮点四: 过去分词作后置定语,比使用定语从句更加简洁。 亮点五:what 引导主语从句,注意从句谓语动词的单复数问题。 亮点六:现在分词作后置定语,比使用定语从句更加简洁。 亮点七:现在分词作目的状语,区别于to do 不定式作目的状语,目的和伴随兼而有之。 Ø 写作小贴士: 1.考生平时要练习一些表格作文掌握其写作格式。 2.表格作文的第二三部分往往与议论文结构一致。在对图表作文格式有所了解的前提下,平时还要多读针对时事的评论性文章,丰富自己的观点。 3.在写作时充分运用各语法知识,丰富英文句子结构。
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