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现在上网阅读的人越来越多,人们可以更快地从网上读到新闻,找到他们所需要的信息或下载文学作品。 1.你认为网络是否能最终代替书刊报纸? 2.举例说明你的理由。 Ø 昂立高考名师周蓉老师样文: ①The digital era is upon us. Thanks to the development of technology, we can ②get an easy access to electronic products, taking online reading for example. Online reading, or e-reading, popular among young people ③as it is, has ④aroused growing concerns over its replacement of traditional paper books in the near future. ⑤There is no denying that the existence of e-reading ⑥enables readers to read “less costly” while enjoying the fun of reading itself. In addition, e-reading is space-saving and can be easily carried--who could ⑦resist the temptation of just a couple of bits for one great works of literature? Last but not the least, e-books are environmental friendly, in harmony with the principle of ⑧“leading a low-carbon lifestyle”. However, I am against the idea that traditional books will completely be taken the place of by e-reading. Those who enjoy reading also enjoy the touch and smell of the printed books. Paper books, ⑨which have served as a medium of human civilization for centuries, will always be a great option whenever people seek for inner peace. And so far as I’m concerned, ⑩instead of plunging myself into the e-era, I try to find some middle ground between convenience and what seems to be rampant consumerism. Ø 内容分析: 此作文抛出了一个时下很热门的社会现象,让考生对此发表看法;话题新--考生需要平时关注网络阅读这个现象并有相应思考;选立场--考生需要表明自己的观点,不能和稀泥;考生首先需要做的就是分析硬币的两面--网络阅读有什么好处?书刊报纸有什么优势?然后再表明自己的看法--网络会不会完全取代书刊报纸?最后陈述自己的观点--认为会或是认为不会,最后再列出选这个结果的缘由。根据类似的破题方法,考生可以举一反三,在平时多训练自己剖析事物的能力。 Ø 精彩亮点分析: 亮点一:典型的英文表达法,体现了中英文思维方式的差异;英文常常以物作主语;“电子时代来临了。” 亮点二:get an easy access to很容易接近;或是有很多机会接触到 ; 亮点三:as it is本句形容词打头,为倒装句。为连词as的特殊用法,表示“虽然在年轻人中很受欢迎,但是......”,考生容易用的although...,此处变换句式,易拿到文采分; 亮点四:aroused growing concerns over 表示“电子书”的普及和流行使得越来越多的人担心起了纸质书的生存。考生倾向用there are more and more worries that...等结构; 亮点五:There is no denying that毫无疑问,注意不要与it is no denying that相混淆,没有后边的表达方式; 亮点六:enables readers to使得读者们如何如何......;这里列举电子书的优点没有使用传统意义上的开篇there are XX advantages, firstly...secondly...thirdly; 推陈出新; 亮点七:resist the temptation of 抵御电子书的诱惑;利用反问句达到肯定陈述的效果,加强语气; 亮点八:leading a low-carbon lifestyle流行词汇表达“低碳生活方式”;平时注重流行元素英文对应,可以为自己的英文表达加分; 亮点九:which have served as a medium of human civilization for centuries, 非限制性定语从句,指出纸质书千百年来一直作为文化传承介质的存在; 亮点十:instead of plunging myself into the e-era, 没有完全投入电子阅读时代,表明作者还是会经常翻阅纸质书,再次点明自己的立场和看法。 Ø 写作小贴士: 考生平时要关注社会热点新闻,并注意积累一些流行社会现象、热点热词的英文表达,以免在写作中遇到类似主题不知道如何翻译、如何开题。 想了解更多关于【上海高考英语培训】相关信息猛戳猛昂立培优网站:http://www.onlycollege.com.cn/ 或电话垂询:400-820-8062关注昂立外语官方微信,有课程代金劵赠送!
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