中考英语|2016年上海中考英语作文范文新鲜出炉

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2016上海市中考英语作文范文及解析

牛刀小试

Write at least 60 words on the topic “ I am ready”.

昂立中考项目部俞静老师参考范文

I’m Ready

I have always been longing for studying abroad, whichis full of challenges as well asopportunities. Therefore,what I should do is to get ready anytime.

As they say, chance favors the prepared mind. I always get myself ready both physically and mentally. First, Iinsist on taking exercise regularly to build up my body.Besides, I spare no effort to learn English well in order to integrate into the new environment as soon as possible. Last but not least, it is necessary to cultivate a shiny optimistic attitude towards difficulties.

With great passion and determination, I am well prepared and deeply convinced that a challenging but fulfilling study life is waiting for me. (115 words)

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作文分析：

2016年上海英语中考作文题目为I’m ready. 虽为命题，但实则确是一篇开放式的作文，ready的对象给予了学生一定的想象空间，可以说是“意料之外，而又情理之中”。不过，今年的这道作文题依然延续前几年的特点——以“我”为出发点，谈的还是学生自己，这点方便了学生有话可说、有情可抒。

精彩亮点分析：

亮点一：long for; be full of; as well as等短语的使用增加亮点；

亮点二：what引导的主语从句；

亮点三：引入谚语“机会是给有准备的人的”；

亮点四：both physically and mentally,亮点副词；

亮点五：insist on doing; spare no effort to; in order to等短语的使用为文章增色；

亮点六：cultivate“培养”，亮点词汇；

亮点七：with great passion and determination作伴随状语；

亮点八：challenging、fulfilling现在分词作定语。