2017上海徐汇区高三一模英语写作范文

作文需求：

如今在上海街头，共享单车（ride-sharing）忽然流行起来。你班同学最近就共享单车这一新兴事物展开了热烈的讨论。请根据下表提示用英语写一篇短文，介绍你班讨论的情况，并谈谈你的看法。

（文中不得出现考生姓名、学校等任何真实信息）

在分享范文之前，不得不指出，这篇作文题干的术语参考提示有不够严谨之处。见来自维基百科的词条解释。

Wikipedia：

Real-time ridesharing： (also, known as instant ridesharing, dynamic ridesharing, ad-hoc ridesharing, on-demand ridesharing, and dynamic carpooling) is a service that arranges one-time shared rides on very short notice. 【表达积累：on/at short notice-not long in advance; without warning or time for preparation】

Bicycle-sharing: A bicycle-sharing system, public bicycle system, or bike-share scheme, is a service in which bicycles are made available for shared use to individuals on a very short term basis.

我们发现，ride-sharing是指向像优步、滴滴打车这样的拼车项目，这从ride这一词的含义也可看出（牛津高阶：a short journey in a vehicle, on a bicycle, etc.），乘坐的不仅是自行车，还有各种交通工具。共享单车的英文表达确切说应是bicycle-sharing，这样才更加具体。不过，这样的失误在应试考试当中罕见，考生要做到心中有数，适当屈从于命题，确保分数无虞。

昂立高考老师范文：

Also, known as public bicycle system, or bike-share scheme, a ride-sharing system is a service in which bicycles are made available for shared use to individuals on a very short term basis, allowing people to borrow a bike from point "A" and return it at point". Those bicycles along the urban street sides in Shanghai seemed to have enjoyed sudden prevalence and have come too vague as an alternative transportation means.

A heated discussion over the system has been ignited among our class with two groups having different views. A minority of classmates hold it negative to have the system. As the rent is metered by certain apps on the cell phones, occasional instability of the mobiles or apps on them, such as lack of power or system failure, may bring fault to the rent. In addition, improper use or deliberate damage has brought about inconvenience to other potential users. They have also pointed out that the coverage is limited only to suburbs, making it unfair for those who desire the experience of this new thing.

In contrast, I’m interested in the sharing system of bikes. The bicycle can be checked out like a library book, and the Library Bike in a person's possession can be chosen for some trips instead of a car, thus lowering car usage. Just like the majority of my classmates in favor of the bicycle system, I’m confident that its wide and long-term use will not only save many travelers from traffic jams, but will contribute to improvement of air quality. Moreover, studies have been published observing an increase in cycling and health benefits where bicycle sharing systems are run. Generally, it has been all the rage in a way that brings better than harm.

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